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It takes all sorts to make this world

So pleased That I'm not one of them.

Crowns to gowns, down low to downs

Moorish and boorish unforgettably poorish but who gives a fuck when he's covered in muck, the class of man the same when he's run out of luck, or is it?

give up freedom, pay your tax,

eat rich food, cholesterol is fat

 mmmmmcds, kfc's

cream jam scones and cups of teas.

 

 

◄ Democracy HuH!!

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Patricio LG

Thu 26th May 2016 12:46

Yes I agree with you Harry, I wasn't sure of the picture to be honest with you anyway, I usually think about the picture this time I just threw it in.
Thanks for the comment though.

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Harry O'Neill

Tue 24th May 2016 13:46

Pat,
I`m struck by the way the rhyme pushes itself into that long line.

But that picture (size-wise) seems to bully the rest of the poem to death.

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