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Forever in your eyes

Forever in your eyes
On the darkness of June
Reserved for a love
Ever fleeting so soon
Valuable time,leaving us fast
Exacting us both,into the past
Reserving a night,for heavenly bliss
Into our last night,into our last kiss
Neither one of us knew,nor had a clue
Years are all we had,and would have to do
On forever love,we put up a fight
Usually people with cancer.still have a life
Reluctant with time,we made a deal
Eventually she would leave,when I grew ill
Yesterday we planned,our night,our last time
Even though she was sad 
She kept forever in your eyes 

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Jul 2016 21:01

This is a lovely poem . like it a lot , it has such a lyrical quality to it. Nice one

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