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bedtime substitute

concoction of threads
in a huggable diameter
with good sprung foam
accompany the wide awake eyes
and the open mouth
that fill the single bed
full of young skin
held back
and stapled scared
to the dampness of pillowcase corners

◄ at the lengths of the sea

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 25th Aug 2009 15:32

Everything is SO GOOD. - diction, internal rhythm and assonance, line breaks, mood - everything. You are so talented.

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