'Nursery for the Old' by RM Carter is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week
The New Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is âNursery for the Oldâ by RM Carter, who is an English literature and creative writing student at Salford University. The poem describes older people in care homes âshuffling through the halls, / dreaming that they skip ⊠sleeping peacefully, / while the radio whispers of World War Threeâ. She plans to be performing at the open mic night Write Out Loud Wigan at the Old Courts in Wigan on Thursday 11 August, adding that âfinally being able to stand upon the stage and expose my soul to peopleâ is both âboth exhilarating and terrifying!â She answered a few quick questions:
What got you into writing poetry?
I have a slight stutter, and so I found that poetry enabled me to express thoughts and feelings that are sometimes difficult to verbally describe. A lot of people who stutter find a similar comfort in writing song lyrics and singing. So in an alternate universe where I could actually sing, Iâd probably be writing my own song lyrics right now!
How long have you been writing?
I have been writing for as long as I can remember. As a toddler I was always carrying two huge bags of paper and pens around with me. In my tweens I co-wrote scripts with my mates and younger sisters for short-film spoofs of Shakespeareâs plays, Dickensâ novels and Homerâs poems. But I only began to write poetry four years ago at college in my English lesson. My teacher asked us all to write a poem for National Poetry Day and I havenât put my pen down since!
Do you go to any open mic nights?
I will be going to the Old Courts in my home town of Wigan on August 11; my first open mic night which Iâm very excited for!
Whatâs your favourite poem/poet?
Carol Ann Duffy is my favourite poet and I havenât tired of her even after over a year of studying her poems at college. My favourite poem by Duffy is âWhoever She Wasâ which very much inspired the main themes in âNursery for the Old.â
Youâre cast away on a desert island. Whatâs your luxury?
A notebook, always a notebook. And it would not only be excellent for writing a Robinson Crusoe- type autobiography while Iâm there, but also a resourceful source of fuel for a fire for the cold desert island nights!
NURSERY FOR THE OLD
by RM Carter
They recline
in rooms filled with their framed-families.
Little boys and girls trapped in time,
skin like watery play- dough hanging from ribs,
silently rattling the bone bars of their cribs.
Slowly shuffling through the halls,
dreaming that they skip. Then
they slump into their soft thrones,
backrests like cushion-y gravestones,
sleeping peacefully
whilst the radio whispers of World War Three.
The beginning are carried in to visit the end.
A babyâs wrinkled hands softly smooth
the crinkles from a creased and crumpled mask.
Your mother traces the first wrinkle on your face,
like the letters of the alphabet.
In the garden,
the Autumn leaves part from the trees.
You help your mother out of the metal pram
and take baby steps
that shake like a newborn coltâs knees.
You feel her ghosting warm perfume,
seeping out of tea-bag skin.
You watch her hair,
whiten and curl,
like a new-born lambâs fur.
The ashy clouds
gather and mist in her eyes.
You watch as her mind floats away
with the dandelion seeds,
as again,
you say you final goodbyes.
suki spangles
Fri 12th Aug 2016 13:16
Hi Rachel, Congratulations on winning POTW. BTW is the last line "you say you final goodbyes", or "you say your final goodbyes"?. My favourite line is "You feel her ghosting warm skin". Cheers!