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she defaults

her limbs are pins
beneath the nightdress
and the memory you have
of when you kissed
too many years
after you first wanted to

◄ bedtime substitute

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winston plowes

Sun 16th Aug 2009 22:21

Hi Emily. Interesting this. What happens to this short poem when you add the word 'stop' (after 'to' at the end)? I like short poems :-) Win x

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