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Children, Sweets and Suicide Bombers

We had stopped by the roadside

just for a break, get some fresh air,

it was good to get out of

those mobile coffins

just to stretch our legs.

 

A bunch of kids

approached us smiling

hands out asking for sweets,

it was good to see smiles,

we don't see that many.

 

As the kids grew bolder, fooling around

some of the younger ones appeared,

little boys and girls, five or six

maybe younger, toddlers,

lots of smiles, lots of chatter.

 

We did not see him,

the guy in the car

he must have stepped up his speed

as he drove towards us.

 

I did not hear a bang

more like a massive shaking of

the ground and air around us,

we had three men down

but the kids, Sweet Jesus the kids.

 

I was screaming like a madman, hatred in my veins

the kids, bits and pieces of the kids

strewn around the bloody ground,

the wounded we tried to treat

but a kid with no legs is hard to save.

 

Screaming Parents, Screaming Marines, Screaming Kids,

body parts, blood and bones and pain,

Lord so much pain,

I could understand him wanting us

but why the kids.

Based on a story in the Independent  of an attack on the USMC in Iraq.

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (6484)

Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:32

Hi Cynthia and good morning to you.
I am glad you have commented on this one Cynthia.
Bernie

<Deleted User> (6484)

Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:29

Thanks Dave, it is good of you to comment, do understand what you are saying, my point of view is that subjects like CSSB should be brought into the public arena, aired to give people the chance to comment.
Again Mate thanks.
Bernie

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 17th Aug 2009 10:27

This is powerful poetry in the best tradition of changing readers forever.

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Dave Bradley

Sun 16th Aug 2009 23:20

Hi Bernie

You may not get too many comments on this even though it has a hell of an impact (perhaps 'hell' being the right word). People may feel as I do that anything they say can't measure up to the reality and it's better to stay quiet. Please don't construe silence as apathy though - we're just out of our depth. Well done for having the courage to be there and to put it into words

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