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meat eaters

somewhat onward

into the unknown--

talking purple fauna await--

 

alien, yet somehow

familiar lifeforms

speak exotic languages..

 

I recognise this place

for it bears the odor

of decay--so off-putting--

and the reason

I did forsake the place

where I grew up.

🌷(3)

◄ CAGED

graduation party ►

Comments

elPintor

Sat 20th Aug 2016 00:23

Sometimes, you just know before you get there..every place you leave just gets better for the leaving..

Thanks for commenting, Dominic.

elP

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Dominic James

Thu 18th Aug 2016 11:55

that third stanza, a good - perspective is close but not the right word - awareness!

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