Ocean Breath
The touch of
ocean breath
and spray
reviving listless
boxed eyes
and minds
to revel
in being
alive again...
Comments
I like the idea of ocean breath and wish you had developed it further. Don't be so mean with your work, you tease us!
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Estelle Haward
Thu 13th Oct 2016 09:18
Thanks Graham. LOL! Will take your advise to heart and develop it further, maybe this is my lesson.