Submersible
hands to the hull
expecting your tapping, your ghosts
late at night I hunt you through the dark
so many fates wrapped up
in your airless little world
it is hard to believe in you
tappings, knockings
are you alive in there?
what do you hear?
wonder about the tide
is it stormy where you are
serene at the bottom, awaiting lift
toward the light
when your fate is in others' hands
serenity reigns
you are at peace,
whatever
storms fly above
at night I dream I am in there with you
gasping for escape
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 8th Oct 2016 08:42
I re-read this after reading the comments and finding understanding and realising just how good the imagery is.
I think the title is terrific and adds a certain openness to interpretation which is no bad thing. The opening line is so very strong - I keep getting drawn back to reading just those four words.
Thanks.