I dreamt of you in a garden
Beautiful and Free
Your face filled with Light
Your heart with Peace
I was gladdened and pained to see you there
Gladdened by your bliss
But pained by the distance
Is it disturbing that I still imagine being with only you?
Our story ended before we could even begin...
I hope that when we meet once more there will be no end...
<Deleted User> (13740)
Sat 7th Oct 2017 04:27
This is beautiful ?
Hi Raj
Thank u very much for the kind words. There will be more to come Godwilling when time allows. ?
Keep well.
Hi Wardah, I love the interplay of joy and pathos.
Best of all it ends with hope, expressed longingly in the last line:
"I hope that when we meet once more there will be no end..."
Some more please. Let your inner voice be heard Wardah.
Take care,
Raj
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Wardah
Sat 7th Oct 2017 22:58
Thanks Nicola I appreciate the comment ? its one of my favourites.