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"Thy Darke Mistress"

You kiss kiss, caress caress caress her,

Think you possess, that flint heart aggressor?

You should pull back the skin and look beneath

Her enigmatic smile, ivory teeth,

Catching the odour of last night’s vodka

Tasting the rancid sweat on her armpits

Check her purse. See those banknotes? Counterfeit.

Spoken with apparent sincerity

Masking a salacious barbarity

Honeyed words, buttered swords, weft on her breath

A siren paean alluring your doom

Deaf to the klaxon’s strident alarums

Madly rushing hot blooded to bed her

Sad, Sucker? You should never have fucked her.

 

[Or the bowdlerised closing line ]

 

Sad, Brother? You should never have loved her.

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◄ “On Glimpsing Suzie”

"R.I.P. Hubbard (Larry) LaFarge" ►

Comments

Merritt

Sun 13th Nov 2016 01:01

There is something so disturbing and mournful about this poem... Many compliments.

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Rick Gammon

Fri 11th Nov 2016 17:25

Our creative writing class' homework this week is to write a sonnet - iambic pentameters no less.
Here's mine - I found a couple of zesty phrases in my 'pending' docs - the vodka breath and sweaty armpits - file and knocked this together - it's kinda Shakespearean - well, you can smell the dung in the midden ?

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