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The Raven

An old poem of mine:

Dark-spirited.
Evil's soul.
Full of darkness.
You will fall.

Beware its presence.
You are prey
to the immortal
leading the way.

The way to the other side,
where evil does hide,
lies in darkest reaches of your mind,
where laws don't abide.
I see your tears dried,
so enjoy your final ride.

◄ Black Birds

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Comments

<Deleted User> (4235)

Fri 18th Sep 2009 22:58

Thank you, Janet. This is indeed an old poem of mine that I thought I would post here.

Hope you have a great weekend.

Melissa

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sat 5th Sep 2009 10:57

Hi Melissa,
i don't remember seeing this one before. It's quite different to many of your other more soulful melody poems. Nice one. It feels strong in it's message.

Hope you're well.
Janet.x

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