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Razors do get dull

Sure, I would die for you

If only it wasn't

Such a hassle

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◄ Yearning downpour

Surface tension ►

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Jeff

Sat 31st Dec 2016 05:56

Brilliant!...Jeff

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Sun 18th Dec 2016 09:37

I used to read / write short nihilistic pieces inspired by some uni mag a friend sent me back in the early 80's. This would have fitted in nicely with those themes. I could really like this poem C&M if it wasn't so much hassle.

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Andy N

Fri 16th Dec 2016 12:43

like the dark humour in this too.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 16th Dec 2016 10:49

Excellent short piece. Clever, dark humour, with a rather lovely sense of ennui about it too ?

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