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Tick, Tock.

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Tick, Tock

Oscillating between periods of pain and pleasure

I live a life of cacophonous contrasts

Never a pause

Never a moment for a reflective breath

And then a cruel and abrupt seizure

Life lies still

Like a clock that you only notice

when it stops ticking.

Goodbye my beloveds.

🌷(2) 

◄ Just Be. Here. Now.

NEW NATIVITY. NEW HOPE ►

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Raj Ferds

Thu 22nd Dec 2016 06:22

Thank you. I honestly like your work. There's always that dark bit which flows in beautifully to eclipse emotions that you're in two minds to express. The intrigue is fascinating.
More please!

Andromeda

Wed 21st Dec 2016 19:59

I like the ending of this a lot "like a clock you only notice, when it stops ticking", very good line

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