The donkeys of Mijas
bear children and overweight parents
around the streets on New Year's Eve.
At work they see nothing
but the cart in front, face their fate
in blinkered silence. Tethered
in stalls, their braying
roars through the town.
Pale-haired twins twirl
each other with ghostly smiles;
Marbella square awash with people,
music as midnight nears.
Our daughter doles out the grapes
and Cava that explodes up my nose,
in my hair, all over my glasses.
Expect the unexpected, I remind
myself, even 2016's last laugh.
Anticipation, apprehension
for the new year
in equal measure
as Spanish children await
the feast of the kings.
Juan Pablo Lynch
Tue 7th Feb 2017 12:48
The first stanza was not really exciting. It was dull. And I don't mean that in a negative way. It was a great start to introduce the second stanza - an unexpected but ephemeral Cava exploding up my nose scene. Then it was toned down a little in the final stanza.
This was wavy. I like this pattern of writing though I am more accustom to writing in a cyclical manner. I'll try something like this.
Thanks for sharing.
Juan