Joy
In a red cardigan
She freewheels
Down the hill
Hazel, sorry for posting this message so late. I really like this, it brought to mind an innocent young girl at play.....but (please forgive me), I then somehow imagined a Mrs Doubtfire freewheeling down that hill in her red cardigan and couldn't keep a straight face! So, well done on many levels! Paul
Thanks Gideon.
Gideon Puccio
Wed 4th Jan 2017 07:15
Such a simple and delightful vision I pictured when I read this. Kind of like a snippet of an opening scene of a "feel good" movie. Great work!
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Hazel ettridge
Thu 5th Jan 2017 21:24
Hi Paul, this was the last verse of a renga and was just meant to be optimistic - so Mrs Doubtfire is a perfect vision.