My mom lives in my heart
Of my world she is a special part
Lots of care and unlimited love
Shes an angel from heaven above
She gives me food and drops me to school
In my life she sets all the rules
Even she scold and yells at me
In her eyes love is what i See
Sometimes i may cause you pain
But i know your darling I will remain
You will always be in my heart
Even though we are miles apart
I love you always and forever
No one can compare to you ever
Beautiful poem
If you don't mind me saying it first seemed like it was written from the perspective of a young child (Mom sets all the rules) but then at the end the perspective change to that of an adult who moved out (miles apart) and is giving mom well deserved props.
However, the line " Even she scolds and yells at me" seems to needs editing
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Preeta Sanjith
Mon 9th Jan 2017 10:25
It was written a long time ago when i was in school....as a part of my school project....I was travelling for some competition and missing my mom terribly...though thoughts and sentiments would still remain the same even today,,,In fact miles apart being more relevant today than anytime else....?