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An Old Note Hidden

Tonight I was meant to work
To get ready for the week ahead
But a surprise was left hidden
Hidden in the pages of my notepad

When it was written we were friends
We still are but time has changed us
To tell me how amazing I am
To make me smile

I now sit here crying
Our friendship is a memory
We still talk
But now you tell me you were in love

It's beutiful
I miss you
We could sort this out in time
But your too far away now.

So tonight
I will tuck this away safely
Because your still my best friend
Even though I am now your memory.

◄ A week's walk away

I can't do this ►

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Samantha Howard

Thu 2nd Mar 2017 19:18

Thank you x I am really glad it tells the story I wanted it to x

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 7th Jan 2017 16:57

Samantha,I was about to (as I am now doing) praise this simple worded,but honestly effective poem.But,before I did,I decided to read your profile to find my name on your favourites list.

Some undiscovered 'soul mating' going on here I think!
for which I thank you,very much.

I hope you enjoy a long stay here.




Rose??

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Fri 6th Jan 2017 23:54

I am really digging this poem...there is an ambiguity in the relationship of the person who wrote the note and the receiver that leaves me wondering if they are just 'best friends' or lovers, maybe even just close siblings. Great work

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