Pointless 11
11.
I don’t care any more
What is caring for?
For you won’t carry me
And I won’t carry you
The length of the course
Til divorce us do part
For I’m no racehorse
And you’re no jockey
Comments
<Deleted User> (6484)
Sat 12th Sep 2009 22:27
A very interesting series of work mate, admire your "difference",
Aye , my mate there done it as regards " I don't care any more" to be BRUTAL , you get of your arse and start living,
Enjoy your writing mate.
Bernie
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
Steve Smith
Sun 13th Sep 2009 13:21
Is this is part of a dialogue..perhaps pointless 10 was the opener and this is the reply... these are like little punches , jabs that take the wind out my sails.
Steve Smith