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The Innocents

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outside there is little left to see

but the dust of destruction,

a torn canvas of abandoned hope

etched in the dried blood of the

dead and dying and the next-in-line,

a taxonomy of wasted life, here

where no birds fly, a land littered

with the debris of its treasures,

souvenirs of senseless hate,

sacrificial remnants of generations

atop the scorched earth, echoing 

a million mother's despairing cries 

that merge with the voices of 

barefooted orphans, 

a coke can for a football

and Messi on their minds, 

the innocents of an uncivil war.

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◄ Prokofiev's Prayer

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Paul Waring

Tue 17th Jan 2017 16:19

Thank you for reading this Jeff and thanks for your apt comments, including the quote by the great MLK. Paul

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Jeff

Tue 17th Jan 2017 15:27

Hits home, as does the topic of the poem. Raj is right & nobody does win a war, even with yourself. Nice quote from Martin Luther King..Peace cannot be kept by force; it can only be achieved by understanding...thanks for sharing Paul...Jeff...

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Paul Waring

Tue 17th Jan 2017 10:50

Well said Raj, and thank you for reading and commenting. Paul

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Raj Ferds

Tue 17th Jan 2017 10:47

So real Paul. Nobody wins a war. But we must continue to stand up for what we believe. What worries me the most is those unfortunate children. Their inheritance is scary and saddening.

"souvenirs of senseless hate,
sacrificial remnants of generations"

Raj

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Paul Waring

Tue 17th Jan 2017 09:33

Thanks again Col, I always enjoy reading your comments. Yes, I hadn't realised the connection between this and Starlingrad (great title by the way). I wanted to write this with those innocent children in mind, the unbearably sad situation they are in and it becoming somehow 'normal' life for them, still being able to find fun in playing football. Cheers, Paul

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Tue 17th Jan 2017 08:35

I feel this runs alongside my Starlingrad quite nicely Paul - different battles for different generations but the outcomes are all the same - we try but fail in many ways to convey the true horrors of war through our words - but that's no reason not to try - or question, or disagree, or stick to our pacifist ideals as poets - if that is in fact what we are and what we stand for.

and you mentioned the birds too ? They at least have the ability to fly away and escape the horrors. Let's hope they return soon but not as my starling shadow ghosts of the fallen dead. Cheers, Col.

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