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Journey of My Time

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JOURNEY OF MY TIME 

by RedVioletSniffy(RV)

I am in a journey of my time, leaving  what I have left behind.
I am in a journey of my time, moving forward its what i have in mind.
I am in a journey of my time,  each step is my countdown.
I am in journey of my time, my laughter gives me  a reason not to frown.
I am in my journey of my time, old is my yesterday .
I am in my journey of my time, New is my today.
I am in my journey of my time, Regrets don't deserve a damn.
I am in my journey of my time, questions are answered by human.
I am in a journey of my time.Good, Bad , High, Low, Sad, and Happy Times its a must for me to Embrace. 

Counting  each steps, minutes, and seconds of this Journey, is a promise of no wasted time.

I am in a journey of my time, A journey of My Lifetime.

 

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RedViolet Sniffy

Tue 17th Jan 2017 09:04

@colin hill thank you so much ... indeed it is !!!

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 17th Jan 2017 09:02

#mypleasure

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 17th Jan 2017 07:56

hello RV, in my opinion I think this would read so much better without the repetition of 'I am in a journey of my time' - but I like the way the poem ends:

I am in a journey of my time
A journey of My Lifetime.

thanks for posting,
Colin

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