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In response to a poetry blog

There's nothing wrong

It's meant to be this way

The accidents

The mistakes

The catastrophes

The losses

The gains

The loves and

The love-nots

Life is a

Beautifully sequenced

Trace on

The flatline

Of death

 

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lynn hahn

Sat 21st Jan 2017 17:40

I love your work on my favorite list you are going!

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Raj Ferds

Tue 17th Jan 2017 10:29

Beautifully expressed Hazel, especially the last 2 lines.

Take the good with the bad, the agonies and ecstasies.
Most important of all accept the fact that from the moment we were born we were destined to die.

So celebrate every moment!
Raj

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