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early evening, early autumn glow
as mersey mist descends
bright as mid summer but fresh
21st century silhouettes
peaceful
like a new start
smoke rises on the water
21st century sounds
grumble
i'm no longer the rural riddle
and i don’t miss it… much
this is the new start
and looking out onto early evening
mersey mist
there are no sewers spewing smells
i can’t see the ground
there is no conversation
that grumble? low like a tiger
is continuous like music
and the swell of the river’s ebbs and flows
slows down my breathing
until i am hibernating
i never thought i could be happy again
<Deleted User> (5023)
Tue 2nd Nov 2010 20:24
nice, easy in the telling!!