Waiting
He stands where he said he would
Underneath the old clock tower
All drapes, crepes and quiff
brushed and combed
The slick black shine
Smoothed back with open palm
He lights another cigarette
Whilst his other hand
Moves a coin across the knuckles
Of his fist
He practices his Elvis smile
A curl of the lip
As he scans the crowd
Through his smoke ringed haze
He pretends to little care
But his attention to detail says it all
Then she emerges
From the pack
With her giggling friend in tow
All cherry lips
Curves curls and twirls
He quickly looks her up and down
With his practiced Elvis nonchalance
Nodding with approval at
Clothes chest and hips
‘Right then’ he says
With as much of a casual air as he muster
‘Shall we do this thing’
The same words he uses
Twenty- Seven years later
To accompany their oldest daughter
Up the aisle
Still trying to conceal
All that he feels
For the one he cares most
No cheap brag or bluster
Martin Elder
Sun 22nd Jan 2017 14:48
Thanks Colin and Hazel.
I am glad that you picked up on the hiding we do Hazel, it is so common particularly amongst men.
yep I remember ted's in the 70's along with the punks and skinheads and the rockabillies. But I guess this guy is set more in the fifties around the time I was born so I don't remember them at that time. But I picture this guy standing underneath the clock tower in the centre of Brighton waiting to go into what was the old regent cinema that I am told had a dance floor before it was all knocked down to create that large boots that is there now.
Cheers to you both
Martin