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I’m now an ant.

Diligent,

organised,

hardworking,

persistent,

industrious,

lively

I live in a weird and wonderful world

 unlike yours, you sad boring mortals

I’m super-organized and driven by the same goals

like the rest of my team. Yes we always work in teams.

Soloists are extinct in our world.

I’m never going to feel small again

cause I can move mountains. Got a team on demand.

Traits you want to integrate

into your mundane existence.

Get a life man!

 

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Raj Ferds

Thu 26th Jan 2017 07:04

Hahahaha love it Hazel. "the horns of a dilemma spring to mind.

Raj

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Hazel ettridge

Wed 25th Jan 2017 16:47

Raj, have you heard the story about 3 men who made a pact that whichever died first would make best attempts to communicate with other 2. Eventually one died and a few weeks later made contact. 'What's it like?' They asked. 'Well, I eat, sleep and have a lot of sex.' They exclaimed that heaven sounded great. 'I'm not in heaven' says the dead one 'I'm a moose in Wyoming'

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Raj Ferds

Tue 24th Jan 2017 17:46

A lot will depend on how many Karmic debts I've got to pay off Hazel. It's looking good so far.?

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 24th Jan 2017 17:00

Careful what you wish for Raj. Next life?

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Tue 24th Jan 2017 12:20

his music would make good marching tunes ? left right left...

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Raj Ferds

Tue 24th Jan 2017 12:12

Hahahaha cheers Colin. Got me thinking too.

I can see the regimented red army marching in single file to their heavenly abode in Ant Hill.

Another one comes to mind -- Adam and the Ants. remember him?

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Tue 24th Jan 2017 11:46

I was watching Winterwatch last night and they were saying that there is no single bird that is head of the flock when starlings mumurate but each single bird can influence approximately 7 more around it and each of those 7 can influence another 7 each etc etc. Good luck being an ant Raj.

Seems to me like this poem could be part Communist manifesto / dystopian nightmare or maybe a performance lecture for new employees at an Amazon 'fulfillment' centre - ooh that word sends shivers down my spine.

Good one Raj, you got me thinking. Cheers, Col.

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