River Estate Retrospective
perfect pattern paving built for hopscotch
roads wide as the dirty River Mersey
side to street a hundred feet
plenty space for kerby
plenty more for ollies green
smashed to glassy smithereens
by Kevin Roberts dobber
in the gutter
twenty pair maternal eyes scrutinize the scene
behind the nets nothing goes unnoticed
every single misdemeanour noted and transmitted
supersonic bulletins of social misbehaviour
dispatches travel faster than the speed of sound or light
penance follows quicker than a wink
outside in the alleyway
salvationary bog
lacked electric light and inner lock
dirtyscary spiderwebbed saviour of the careless child
delivered us from shaming yellow knickers
piddled all the quicker on the cold and snowy days
secondhanded vehicles the weekend entertainment
forehead scratchers crowd around the one remaining Haynes
consulting oily oracle, extrapolating data
communicating contradicting estimating engine parts
sorting out solutions on the cheap, communally
see the scrappy, bartering a favour for the spares
winter sunshine sinks beneath the farmerfield rise
and the trig point, where you can see for miles on all sides
and the hollow of the Dell
and the ditches full of dens
teatime dishes clatter onto tables laying down
butter placed before the fire for half an hour's heat
plates are warmed and so it seems that every single family
is eating Irish stew tonight
going by the smell upon the River
Epilogue
The River Estate, Merseyside.
A 1975 pre-Thatcher slice of life.
Community and care
where the posh kids parents stared
through the windows of their Rover
then kindly let me know that it was
"Quite nice, really, for a council house estate"
which surprised me, cos I'd only ever thought of it as home.
Laura Taylor
Fri 27th Jan 2017 11:49
Thanks Colin
Yeh, do similar myself, but wanted this to be almost childlike/nursery rhyme in its refrains, with it harking back to my childhood. And obviously it is very much a performance piece again.
Mmm - take on board that initial ppp - will have a play around with alternatives. Erm no urchins involved that I know of - it's not my project though so not sure of all details.
Thanks again