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here we are again

well here comes that feeling again

the sour taste in my mouth

the clinching gut

the tunnel vision that holds me in the sight of anger and frustration.

what makes it worse is i've been here before, more times than I can count

and still no soulution

I can't help but to think whether she has a hold on me

or whether my thoughts are even just.

it does make me long for a warm heart

maybe that is enough to tell me something important

or maybe I am a selfish man lost in desire

maybe I would like to see it all burn up in a funeral pire

one thing is for sure, I am tired

tired of this feeling coming round again

 

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Wed 1st Feb 2017 03:43

Ahhh, I know the feeling all too well and this poem is a good way to let people know that this feeling is felt universally, or at least by not just me. myself and I. I think this feeling sets us on a negative mindset that says that we are the only one in the struggle and we are tired because no one is helping or the situation is hopeless and I'm alone ( which is never true cuz God has placed helpers in everyone's life and He is always there)

Great piece.

Juan

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