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SUNDAY MORNING

easy like Sunday morning

that's my man...

no drama

dressed in laughter

that's what I'm after

ready to walk a mile

to make me smile

heart so warm

takes away every storm

oh babe I will return the pleasure

I'll be your favorite treasure.

by lynn hahn

 

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lynn hahn

Tue 7th Feb 2017 18:04

I'm in! Let's do it!!!!

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Tue 7th Feb 2017 08:00

I saw the title and immediately had the Velvet Underground's song in my head. The sentiments are similar but not quite, but I see you went with the Commodores tune instead. They must have made a mint with that one. Nice poem Lynn. I like it. Just add copious amounts of sunshine for the perfect Sunday stroll along the beach (with the dog of course), lots of soft focus photography and we could have the makings of a 70's advert. C?L

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