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And I propose Today !

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When I think of you , I blush 

I humm and sing out some sentimental mush

The very thought of you makes me smile ;

Like you had been close to me all this while .

Those 3 magical words when you say 

Fills me with happiness , makes my day

Feels like sinking in those beautiful eyes 

You are my angel ; a blessing in disguise

My mousey has a cute little nose ;

I hope and pray this lovely feeling only grows

Feels on the top of the world ; when you hug me tight

Never wanna loose an inch of your sight .

My hand in yours ; Yours in mine 

Love like wine ; only gets better with time

You fill the empty spaces in my life

Come hold my hand and make me ur wife

 

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For u abhi

◄ Are you the one ?

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 8th Feb 2017 09:30

Lovely Krati, nice flow and leaves me smiling ?

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Krati Singhal

Tue 7th Feb 2017 16:47

thank you kishore

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kishore karunik

Tue 7th Feb 2017 16:21

very good

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