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You and me

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You and me

-kishore karunik

 

Dazzling fog at dawn

Thou came with a sweet variety

Abnormal in luxuries dream

Where death our daily companion

Frets vivacity in lifeless there

Yet there the struggle for survival

It is you and me!

◄ Condemn

Beauty abloom ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 17th Mar 2017 11:28

This formation of words seems awkward at first, but if allowed to flow through the mind, coagulate into a fine, connected thought pattern, a paring down of philosophy to bare bone.

If that makes any sense.

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