Ablaze
I got poems
in my heart for you
but I can't get them out.
For weeks now
I've been writing you
inside my mind,
playing with the words,
looking for the rhyme.
You stop time
with your eyes
you own me complete
the blue and the green
inside a fury
of colour and dreams.
A maddening desire
you ignite inside,
keeps me up
most nights I can't sleep
because I'm lost in the deep
and all I do
is think about you
and all the little things
you do.
You blow me away,
each new day
a different shade
and I no more feel
the rain inside my brain
nor the ache inside
my absent space.
You light up my world,
my heart ablaze
does burn and burn.
The love it floods,
pure red
through and through.
I go under in the rush
come back coloured new.
©JMCole
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 12th Feb 2017 09:07
I like this lots but see it as a series of five interconnected short poems that I want to separate with ~'s or number 1,2,3,4,5. They are all quite delightful and near perfect in their own right - although I would personally axe 'because I'm lost in the deep' which to me breaks the flow and sleep / deep is just too rhymey for me. Nice one MDA.
All the best, Col.