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The Moment matters

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Moment

by moment

by moment.

Every moment opens the door to other moments

so I opened the door to you with a benevolent heart

and you walked in

creating a confluence of two bodies and souls

dancing to the rhythms of the universe.

You became the moment. And so did I.

Let’s stay here now you said. This moment really, truly matters.

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 15th Feb 2017 09:09

I love a moment. In fact 'moment' is one of my favourite words and probably crops up regularly in my writing. Poetry is often about capturing a moment however small or transient or insignificant. Thanks for capturing this one particular moment Raj.

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Raj Ferds

Wed 15th Feb 2017 07:47

Glad you like it Hazel.

How I wish that staying in the present will be my natural state of being. Working on it?
I wish that more and more people would stop dwelling on the past or worry about the future. It would make it a much better world.

Om Shanti.
Raj

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 14th Feb 2017 19:27

Let's stay here now you said
Really love this line.

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Raj Ferds

Tue 14th Feb 2017 15:37

Thank you Juan. There is nothing like the power of the present!!

Raj

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Tue 14th Feb 2017 14:57

Lovely, every moment does matter...such a powerful poem...
Thanks for sharing.

Juan

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