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In Budapest

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

Lit only by cafe glow

To see a dog 

Taking a pee

And bundles in doorways

That are sleeping men

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

Where students  smoke 

and taxis speed by

Or wait for fares

Where the smell of pancakes

And curry mixes

With the rubbish of the day

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

And yes, I admit to

Feeling a little afraid

Of men just standing and

Men just turning away

And dark alleys

Where muffled music plays

And sounds of life

Come in short gasps

Ah, the thrill

the thrill of running

Running down a street

In Budapest

 

 

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◄ La Petite Mort

With a nod to Dylan (Bob not Thomas) ►

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Hazel ettridge

Mon 27th Feb 2017 17:02

Running because it was all so exciting. I did sauntering during the day, but the dark evenings just made me want to run - exuberance. Maybe I needed more words.

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Raj Ferds

Mon 27th Feb 2017 15:46

I see a short Fellini-like film in your poem Hazel. black & white with seepia thrown in. An eerie play of light and shade.

Those streets I guess still resonate with memorials of those won't let us forget. That's probably why you were a little afraid even with the lions guarding the broad bridge.

Still, rather engaging!

Raj

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Raj Ferds

Mon 27th Feb 2017 15:39

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Mon 27th Feb 2017 09:21

I'm a little confused why you were running Hazel? From what to where and for why? I love the mix of imagery from the inviting smells to the slightly scary that makes you both thrilled and a little afraid. Thrill implies a certain amount of pleasure which I assume outweighs the threat. Curious Col ?

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