Unfinished conversations

Sunday 5th March 2017 2:43 pm (first posted Saturday 4th March 2017 4:18 pm)

and sometimes she just leaves
u with y running through your mind
knowing full well it doesn't end in z

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Sun 5th Mar 2017 14:44

Thanks for the advice Colin. I really appreciate your alteration to my poem.

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Sun 5th Mar 2017 08:34

as this is an unfinished conversation you could also maybe write the last line

knowing full well it doesn't end in Z

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