Goodbye.
I’m almost at the end
Complaining every day
About my drunken roommate
Here’s what I have to say
Your actions haven’t changed
As you dig and shovel down
Keep on reaching deep, new lows
Far beneath the ground
I’m trying not to judge
Though it’s hard to do
You saw me go through shit before
When I did drugs like you
You know I’ve gotten sober
In which you don’t seem phased
When you still come home to party late
I’m now beyond amazed
When people lack respect,
Consideration too
It brings me great discomfort
I cannot to live with you
I see beyond your niceness
It comes across as fake
I sense you only talk to me
So that you can take
The money that I offer
To pay you half the rent
If I could I’d move out long ago
But most my paycheck’s spent
So here’s my 1 months’ notice
Not sure yet what I’ll do
But I find relief in saying that
And goodbye to you
Fush Moss
Mon 13th Mar 2017 20:04
I enjoyed the poem and am glad you're on the other side of drug use. I did notice a couple of grammatical errors.
"I cannot to live with you" an unessary to
"If I could I’d move out long ago" move should be moved since I'd is past tense
"As you dig and shovel down" is an amazing word picture!?