Thank you
for making me believe
that i was too ugly
to even love myself.
thank you
for making me believe
that my self worth
depended on how i am in the bedroom.
thank you
for being the worst human being,
that you could ever be.
but truly,
honestly,
thank you
for making me realize
that i am more
than what you ever said i was.
thank you, Raj. I was trying to show a transformation within this poem. I feel that there is a common trait of transformation or a mood of sadness or enlightenment within my works. thank you for your kind words, I will continue to write. x
Nice one Maria.
I like the way how the central message of 'thank you' strings together all that you wanted to say ...ending with a positive transformation.
Raj
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Raj Ferds
Wed 22nd Mar 2017 07:28
Keep going Maria. You can only get better.
Yes I noticed the pathos in your work. Nothing wrong with that. Gives you an identity. Stay enlightened.
Raj
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