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Wife

 

I am of age.

The air is fecund  with voices spitting clay,

rendering my flesh palpable for fingerprints.

 

My waist is slight, you can hold me like a glass,

drink me, for I make you tall.

My insides are esoteric and I know.

 

I am part woman and part fable;

every movement you mark is a moral

but it finds a lie on me.

 

I mate with fevers, blind and with

custom, I get sick for you

and you rest, reassured,

 

like a cigar. I am mad. You married me

to forget me and lean,

draping your assets in the pallor of limbs

 

That excite you anywhere but here.

All women should love you –

That’s why they are born.

◄ The End of the Affair

Victory Gin ►

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winston plowes

Mon 28th Sep 2009 09:45

Hi Marianne, Thought this one was excellent. Loved the wine glass waist and the first stanza which opens with a bang.
I was working at a birthday party on Sunday from which I could see the Heptonstall graveyard!
Winston

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 26th Sep 2009 15:23

For me, one of your best; a little less esoteric in structure, with hard-hitting truth using memorable imagery. Isn't 'draping' a gorgeous word? Do you ever hesitate to use certain words even from one poem to another? Regardless of time lapse?

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