Home Front (part 1)
First of all Iwould like to apologise for the length of this entry, in print it runs to over 30 pages so I understand if you don't want to read it. I've only been able to post the first part herebut if people want to read the rest I can publish it in parts I guess. I confess that the poems I have posted here so far are older poems. I wanted to get a feel for the material on the site and build a few relationships with other poets before sharing my magnificent octopus.
I do not know the method of drawing up an indictment against an whole people.
(Edmund Burke ��" 1729-1797, author of Reflections on the Revolution in France)
Dramatis Personae
CLOVERLEAF a soldier
STRONGARM a soldier
WAR
NARRATOR
VOICE
Act 1
The stage is bare and the lights are up. A member of the audience gets up and stands on the stage. They should be dressed in a style slightly out of time or place. As they speak the lights should lower until the theatre is in darkness.
NARRATOR: Through the rain’s curtain a shadow I could see
A black coated figure all huddled in misery
And as I drew closer her face I did notice
All drawn with the sadness and pain in her heart
Her eyes, like the sky, had known beauty in summer
But now they seemed grey and were filled up with clouds
The dim sunlight glistened upon the wet gravestones
The rain smeared the makeup which ran down her face
She told me a tale that was joyful and tragic
As she bent down and laid flowers on the grave
The flowers were roses, their petals held raindrops
Each blossom was red as the blood in your veins
The call of a raven I heard from a treetop
Her thoughts interrupted the story did end
Blinking the tears from her eyes as she left me
Alone in the graveyard chilled by what she said
From the darkness...
WAR: I rule this land with an iron hand
And you’ll never be set free
So listen well as a tale I’ll tell
Of how I came to be
I fought with supernatural strength
For many days and nights
To eradicate all innocence
Make wrong instead of right
And crimson blood did wash the land
My victims they did scream
For burning fire I poured on them
Fulfilling all my needs
Yet still I claimed to fight for truth
For liberty and freedom
By lies and propaganda cruel
I justified what I had done
Those who returned still bear the scars
Within their mind is turmoil
Blindly they followed my command
Cross any foreign soil
And now you ask me of my name
Who can this monster be?
I tell you mankind I’m your god
War is and always shall be.
The stage is laid out as the interior of a railway carriage. Various sounds can be heard from the busy platform. The atmosphere is that of a pleasant summer day with lots of light. There is much good natured commotion in the corridor where laughter and conversation can be heard. Suddenly, two men burst into the carriage, still laughing and joking. The men are young and wear military uniforms. They spend a few moments stowing away kit bags before settling down.
STRONGARM: Pray comrade let us grin like cats and be of good mind
A bold future unfurls before us, leave dull lives behind
Let’s grasp firm to adventure, fate may take its path
Youth and courage on our side, in fear’s face we laugh
CLOVERLEAF: My friend this is a dream we’ve shared since infant days
To leave our kith and kin, seek out that unknown place
Where boys can earn their passage through acts most brave
Into an adult world is something we both have craved
STRONGARM: But now that we’ve achieved our goal why seem you sad?
We’ll see the world, do great deeds, come you should be glad
Upon our return our friends will all gather round to say
Look how these boys became men once they had gone away
Now we shall be more great than Heracles
And count heroic tasks at more than ten
We shall sack Troy and return triumphant
With olive garlands wreathed about our heads
Epic poems shall recount our brave deeds
The people shall erect marble statues
Great monuments, a source of National pride
In memory of our many victories
And while women of our enemies weep
We shall take our pick of fairest maidens
Have treasures heaped upon us as reward
In history’s book our names shall be writ large
Our story told to children through the age
That they may marvel, wonder, be in awe
At those who shaped their nation’s greatest days
CLOVERLEAF: Your words are bold and may be true
But me I have my doubts
Though forces from the East are few
For six months could hold out
As winter takes an iron grip
A chance could through our fingers slip
Power in the balance tip
In favour of our foes
STRONGARM: Now listen to me well my friend
All from the East shall broken be
At our hands meet bloody ends
While brave words are spoken see
Western boots shall break their skulls
As satisfied our hunger dulls
Then peace shall reign again
CLOVERLEAF: I know the politicians’ words
Of Eastern neighbours’ bad intent
But men are all the same I’ve heard
Our foe’s not by the Devil sent
Is it not true we’re all the same?
Blood and bone in mortal frame
Why should we go to war?
STRONGARM: Like us they are clearly not
More like a tumour cut them out
A cancerous, infectious blot
When left unchecked it oozes out
Polluting us with their foul blood
And our pure line thus weakened could
Be destroyed for ever more
CLOVERLEAF: But speak you not of men like us?
With children, wives and homes
How could they bring on such a curse?
That chills us to the bone
They tend their fields with gentle hand
Just like us, caring for their land
Why should they mean us harm?
STRONGARM: These are your brothers? So you say
Yet they would slay you in the night
Like Jackals sniffing out their prey
While slinking through the moonlight
They’ll rape and steal from our kind
And burn down any home they find
No shred of mercy shown
CLOVERLEAF: Our land is rich with fertile fields
That can provide all that we need
Each harvest gives sufficient yield
It can all of our people feed
We have such wealth why do we blame
Outsiders who are not the same?
They cannot do us harm
STRONGARM: We are indeed a lucky breed
To occupy a land so rare
That we can live both safe and free
The reason you can clearly see
The Sentinel stands there
Built by our forebears long since passed
For centuries stood firm and fast
To guard our sacred earth from coast to hills
Ensuring that no evil left its lair
Though howls its threat and so he stands there still
And watches over this our nation fair
That noble golden statue that stands glimmering
Atop our highest snowy mountain peak
Cold, remote and lonely stands he shimmering
As we look up in awe with pride we’re brimming
And he fills us with the confidence we seek
He seems alive at least to all our minds
A vital, vibrant symbol of our kind
And though none of us dare to climb that mount
Nor have they done for years too great to count
Afraid are we to set upon that sacred place
Where icy winds still blow and snow lays deep
The Sentinel his holy vigil keeps
With wise and noble look upon his face
And while he stands as guardian to our state
We need not fear the fickle hand of fate
Take heart my fellow countrymen, be bold
Stand firm against the sly and grasping hoard
Be like that noble watchman forged from gold
And as we build a pyre from broken bones
That we’ll harvest from our foe in battles heat
And light a bonfire at our guardian’s feet
Then dance and sing around the fire
Celebrate victorious
Chanting loud we’ll feed the flames
With bodies of our subdued slaves
Watch as the flames burn strong
They’ll light up his golden face
As though he joins the song
The Sentinel will leave his place
And dance among the throng
So take heart comrade that I pray
Let happy thoughts take hold of you
Take heed of all the words I say
For only truth do they convey
Carry them with you to battle’s fray
And share them with your comrades too
Inspire them with your bravery
Release them from fear’s slavery
To join that bold but happy few.
The train begins to slow down and stops. There are noises, voices from the platform.
STRONGARM: What happens brother, can you see?
Why has our mission paused?
Nothing must stand in the way
Of our most righteous cause
For if one fights the viper’s strike
Poison is the only cure
But must be given lightning like
To make recovery sure
So there must be no more delay
Go tell them, move along!
I’m eager now to join the fray
Not wait here all day long
CLOVERLEAF: Soldiers, soldiers young and brave
Want to climb on board
Our fellow countrymen to save
From evil, fire and sword
But see now as they hesitate
Turning now to remonstrate
With someone frail and old
STRONGARM: You must describe just what you see
For this does seem too strange
I think you must mistaken be
For youth respects old age
CLOVERLEAF: They gather now around the man
Kick and beat him so
I can’t explain, perhaps you can
Why our young men would do such things
Upon our state great shame it brings
As they strike blow on blow
STRONGARM: This is a puzzle, it is true
Why would our boys behave this way?
Come tell me there must be some clue
A reason for affray
CLOVERLEAF: From this man’s clothing I would say
That he has travelled from the East
The soldiers for his blood they bay
He now lies beaten on the ground
His begging makes a pitiful sound
But the beating does not cease
<Deleted User> (5646)
Sun 27th Sep 2009 22:01
I enjoyed the use of older language in this too.
I think from the first image and idea of a woman in clothing of a different era carries the language used through towards the imagery of soldiers dress very nicely.
Have to admit it took me a while to pluck up the time to start reading such a long piece but happy i did. Will try to read the next edition tomorrow. A good story.
Janet.x