Not Noticed by Zakiya Johnson
Who notices the beautiful flower
No one does because she is broken
But now awoken she notices
No one seems to leave a care
Leave a care for one who's broken
And just out there
She is scared
She will fade soon and no one will hear...
The words that's spoken
From underneath the girl thats broken
Rainy dream, she tries to breath
Damp, dry, air that's cold
Watch her life unfold
Non restored, she's lost
Trying to find her story
Only joy is showed within her future
Believed to be connect by heart and hands of another soul
But with the thought of solitude & doubt
She will forever sit in the cold alone
Because no one likes a broken little soul.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Fri 7th Apr 2017 19:06
lovely lilting rhythm to this piece Zakiya especially in the first half. I like the repetition of some of the words and the rhymes within lines like broken / awoken. Yes, rhymes don't have to be relegated to the ends of lines and mixing them up adds layers in my opinion. Thanks for posting.
Colin