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Queen of Camden

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the streets of Camden still mourn music 

royalty, the queen who lived too much,

soared too high, near to the scorching sun 

where only the mad and geniuses fly.


and twenty seven arrived too soon, 

before your time but time enough to tattoo 

yourself on hearts and minds. On that day

I heard the legend of Sarah Vaughan cry.


and wandering into Stables Market I hear 

you breathing from a bronze statue that echoes

your raw, sweet sound and everything that 

is you, hand on hip, beehive, the pose of


the pained Queen of Camden who now 

shines with the spirits in the sky. Amy, 

forgive me but I have to ask, if by chance 

you see Marvin, could you tell him I said hi?

 

 

 

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Paul Waring

Thu 13th Apr 2017 07:50

Thank you so much Greg, I really couldn't have hoped to receive such high praise. I'm thrilled that you liked this so much.

And Mr Col, how I chuckled at your comment that explains the marmite mystery, and almost creased up laughing at the cheesy line. Great stuff ?

Thanks again to you both.

Paul

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Wed 12th Apr 2017 19:31

Yikes! Think I might have upset the Amy Winehouse Appreciation Society! 'Marmitey' as in either loving or hating but (*types hastily*) hate is much too strong a word. Pass the ladder this hole is getting deeper. Certainly not cheesy. We had enough of that with your last offering ?

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Greg Freeman

Wed 12th Apr 2017 17:10

Paul, there is a marvellous music and rhythm to this, or swing, I should say. When you're writing about someone who is close to so many people's hearts, it's important to get the words right. You have done. Thank you. I think she would approve. What a voice. What a loss.

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Paul Waring

Wed 12th Apr 2017 15:28

Thanks Col and Graham for your compliments and thank you David for the like.

Col, I have just typed a detailed response and it suddenly disappeared. Ay,ay, ay....the pain. Anyway, briefly, thanks for the honest feedback, I appreciate you taking time to do this and I find it helpful. btw, is marmitey like cheesy? I really didn't want to create that feel (mental note: must buy a cheese-o-meter!). I followed her career quite closely from before she signed to Island Records. I think she was an amazing talent, and this was echoed by the likes of Aretha Franklin. Genius? Who can say? She was not everyone's cup of tea I know. And mentioning Marvin (Gaye) was simply me imagining the possibility of these two great singers meeting.

Graham, thank you for your kind words. I do hope I got the balance right. And, yes, I agree, she left music of the quality of 'back to black' that can continue to be enjoyed.

Thanks again to you both,

Paul

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 12th Apr 2017 10:45

When the young die too early their sins tend to be easily overlooked as they will not enjoy the time to reflect on themselves later in life.

This is a nicely weighted tribute Paul, not too gushy. She was damaged goods for sure. If I had been her father (equally damaged) I wouldn't have let her get so screwed up.

The good news is we'll always have "back to black"

Good work.

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Wed 12th Apr 2017 10:28

bit Marmitey this one for me Paul. I never quite got the Wonder of Winehouse or Diana for that matter - or one of any number of modern day drugged and beleaguered celebs/royals/athletes etc yawn etc. Seems they all fed/feed on each other - media frenzy/public adoration/rehab bills. How do you separate any of it? The age thing is a bit uncanny but I suspect there is some correlation with them all finding stardom at a young age followed by a successful but short career and demise around the same point.

having been all negativey I do think there is much to admire in this poem - 'time enough to tattoo yourself on hearts and minds' is a great line and I love the ending. But I don't think she was a genius. Perhaps by asking her to say hi to Marvin you are knocking her down a peg or two?

thanks for posting Paul - she will always divide opinion and create debate which is a good legacy. Thanks also Suki for redirecting me back to Cracked Symbols and giving me the chance to reread those floral tributes again.

Cheers
Col

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Paul Waring

Wed 12th Apr 2017 09:10

Thanks Suki, I have just read Cracked Symbols and enjoyed it tremendously, brilliantly inventive writing. So sad how many 'stars' died aged 27, it's uncanny. Glad you liked this one Suki, much appreciated.

Paul

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suki spangles

Wed 12th Apr 2017 02:22

Hi Paul,

I didn't realise Amy is also a part of the so-called 27 club.
Lovely poem.

Funnily enough, I wrote the poem Cracked Symbols about the aftermath of her passing a few months ago.

Cheers,
Suki

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Paul Waring

Tue 11th Apr 2017 20:35

Thank you Ghazala for your kind compliment. And, true indeed, this life is so uncertain.

Paul

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Tue 11th Apr 2017 18:07

life is uncertain...but death is certain...each one has its own time....either too early or too late....still v die!!! no matter how much fame and glory we earn, from dust we came..to it we return.....lovely poem!!!!

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