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Heaven in Hell

I was then a lonely boy with no friends or family

I was too afraid to say anything and thinking that

everyone knows what I know, sees what I see, no one cares

It felt like I was but a mouse that’s caught up in a trap

With nowhere else to go, and had nobody there who cares

Then comes the day you opened up the door and let me in

That day I'll not forget, the day I found my family

Because of you I feel like heaven in this hell I’m in

But now I know that hell is hell no matter how it feels

It felt so good that I would not have ever want to go

But there I was caught in a dream, I would’ve not awaken from

I have to face the truth that this is nothing but a dream

I’d love to stay forever in this dream yet I must not

It’s time to go now from here to wherever I must be

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Comments

<Deleted User> (19836)

Fri 17th Aug 2018 15:02

Very profound. I believe all too often Heaven and Hell are interchangeable. Thank you. Jane

<Deleted User> (18118)

Fri 8th Jun 2018 21:07

Very moving.
Powerful description of sadness.

Hannah

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