Watching a Group of Angry College Kids is Weirdly Entertaining
Downtown
east of
High street
where cars run rare
and exude mating calls
through means
of
rap.
Across from
the
funeral home
with running rust
that is
synonymous to melting
is an
art school
who prides a sign
that
arches over 9th street
that reads
A R T
and in essence
is bodied
of what could be known as design
or
in other words
describes young
fruit
that grows ripe
through means
of drawing body outlines
on sidewalks parallel to the
student
that kissed a semi
in th street
or otherwise
amalgamates into a being
against
when students
are called
false names
given to them by the
Stork.
in front of
an
audience of
recorders.
They stand along
with their
new fashioned
signs
to create
new meaning
of the same part
of
town.
Laura Taylor
Fri 12th May 2017 16:05
You're welcome - and welcome to WOL too, I hope you'll enjoy it here.
We all like to play with line breaks don't we? But what we should be aiming for is extra meaning, more significance, added ambiguity, rather than 'why's it ended like that?'.
Anyways, have a great weekend ?