mans sober state
Man must express emotion
Else it will hurt
be aware
Of the drunken bar spurt confessions
Of emotion
On the odd occasions
men finally admit
An ounce of loving feeling
And man must make amends
For statements that,
When sober pretend to be
Anything but obvious
And he may well do it in alcohol
Or the high of substance certain
But without prop
Or curious quill to write
He must connect to the climbing plight
And quest
Of an emotion set at rest
In a sober frame of mind
Else it will hurt
be aware
Of the drunken bar spurt confessions
Of emotion
On the odd occasions
men finally admit
An ounce of loving feeling
And man must make amends
For statements that,
When sober pretend to be
Anything but obvious
And he may well do it in alcohol
Or the high of substance certain
But without prop
Or curious quill to write
He must connect to the climbing plight
And quest
Of an emotion set at rest
In a sober frame of mind
Francine
Sun 5th Apr 2009 19:39
I really like this Pete...
The first and last lines together say it all ; )