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Fruition

We chase intuition
Playing at something assumed
Hoping desperately to be right
Ill intented or not
Presuming a position of power and poise
Ignoring the noise
Finding the hem in our stories
Knowing change is the only constant
The only means to light in the night
Dropping history in spite
As plants drop dried peddles before the budding
We must drop the old so the new can thrive
So the new can drive
Come threw the night
Continue the fight in a more precious light

◄ Sinking Star Sand

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 19th May 2017 11:34

You are not only an 'interested reader-writer' you are interesting to read. Your thoughts run deep, and are worth sharing.

Spell checks do not pick up everything. The 'threw' you have used is past tense of 'throw' as in 'I threw the ball.' I'm pretty sure you meant 'through' as in 'passing through'. Don't let such spelling block your writing, of course. I'm thinking, if you are this keenly observant and just plain clever, that you won't mind a helping hand sorting some 'spelling bugs' out. English is the pits! for spelling.

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