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Late Summer

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The swallows are diving

in the light of the evening,

unfurling themselves and

arrowing ceaselessly

into the deepening

reservoir above our heads.

 

They cry wildly to one another

caught in the sway of their daring

like the boys at Cala Algaiarens

who lept from the crooked rocks

for the gasps of tourists,

their tail ends scissoring

into the bright blue.

 

Now they’re keeping their promise here,

in the cooling air

above our dampening table,

these children who won’t come to sleep

are beating back night

with every swoop.

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Frances Macaulay Forde

Fri 2nd Jun 2017 03:20

Playing with perception, I loved this visually intriguing poem.

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Tom Harding

Tue 30th May 2017 12:31

Thanks both.

Thanks Colin, I agree there's nothing that reminds me of summer more than swifts and swallows. I did think of holding back until later in the season but I think the recent warm spell had me thinking about those balmy late summer days.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 28th May 2017 16:25

A beautiful subject sensitively, artistically handled. Much enjoyed.

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Sun 28th May 2017 09:10

What a beauty of a poem Tom - I love the way the swallows become the divers. I almost wanted them to become our own children in the third stanza - making the most of the last of the summer evenings to stay out late in the garden, swooping around with arms outstretched in imitation.

I totally adore swallows, house martins and swifts - swifts being my favourite because of their sickle shaped wings and the fact they spend most of their lives up in the air even sleeping on the wing. And they screech and scream too.

I'm wondering when you wrote this Tom and could you not have held it back till Late Summer? But I'm glad you did post it today - as I said before, it's a beauty.

Thanks,
C?L

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