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The Concrete Road

the concrete road

 

still dark and darkening night, the dead cold of dying winter,

rain against the windscreen, speed in easy, selfish solitude.

my shirt gives up the scent of soap.

(i have no other dream.)

 

noise surrounds me, the oil-ribbed sounds of a lost summer,

the meaningless bypass between here and some other place.

yet hands formed this path.

(i have no other dream.)

 

a dead orchestra in Bonn works magic from the 80s, stops,

dresses me in excess; red leather, black velvet, purple lace.

there’s meaning in melancholy.

(i have no other dream.)

 

blow a horn to warn of danger, sound the town’s sirens,

let her rise to war, make battle plans, strengthen forts,

map no retreat.

(i have no other dream.)

 

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Becky Sowray

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 12:37

thanks both. much appreciated

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Raj Ferds

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 11:29

Wow. That got me Becky. Your words paint a lot of pictures in my mind. Pretty sensual.

There is a message hiding in there that I can't find.
(I have no intention of looking for it).

Well done.
Raj

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Laura Taylor

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 09:52

Ooo I'd just logged out and had to log back in again when I saw this. Such intricate wordplay here Becky, and some beautiful sonics and imagery, with a double dose of ambiguity. The first two stanzas are outstanding.

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