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Grandad's Armchair

Grandad’s Armchair

Strange smelling, mustard brown moth-eaten chair, where Grandad sat on a Sunday afternoon after lamb with all the trimmings.

Like a heaving ancient giant, with his mouth ready to catch flies and glasses knocked to one side, he snores and wheezes, his tongue sissing like a snake.

With a choo choo train I fly around and scream and crash and wallop into everything; as Action Man punches the Lego train station and Dr X sings a Ring-a Ring o’ Roses, when a hush from my mother reminds me that Grandad’s sleeping in his throne.

A steady snore, a brief opening of the eyes and a little smile, you raise your head and then your arms and beckon me. A kiss for your grandson in the bright Sunday sun, adorned in your arms, tis a shame that you’re gone.

🌷(3) 

grandad   family poem   reminiscent

â—„ Driftwood

OCD â–º

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Karen Ankers

Sun 25th Jun 2017 09:36

Beautifully descriptive. Well chosen details build up a vivid picture. Love this intimate snapshot.

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Sat 24th Jun 2017 23:30

'grandads sleeping in his throne...awww
lovely poem Toby.


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