The Echoes poetry competition to celebrate Write Out Loud's 20th anniversary is now open.  Judged by Neil Astley.

Competition closes in 5 days, 12 hours. Get details and Enter.

a poem i did when i was witth vicky

entry picture

THROUGH THE EYES OF A CHILD

 

Lovely spring evening spent in Manchester with my new sweetheart. A few drinks in pubs once full of a blitzed population. On the same streets my dad saw ablaze by Nazi bombs, his son courts his new gal. A kiss is stolen on streets once burning end to end. How many guys and gals didn’t make it? Father’s legacy passed onto his son. A city in flames Xmas time 1940 a sight a boy should never see but did Manchester in flames.

In his dad’s car Ashton to Oldham what a sight to see, I walked these same streets today with my girl. What if we were under those bombs? An undefended city hit without mercy from the air. She said we are near a terrorist target today, what if? We are alive. As I dance in my club to dark music I think of Vicky. I’m in a city that was touched by darkness. Fate let a city survive let two people meet. I pray peace for me and Vicky, no war.

â—„ i did these in pub lol while waiting to do my open mic

a bit of a cliche but still relevant... â–º

Comments

No comments posted yet.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message