Script Confusion
Script Confusion
There seems to be
Some confusion
You're actually
Playing the villain
You don't get to sleep
With the heroine
The kids are the ones
The audience sympathize with
You do get some of the best lines
They fly over everyone's heads
You might be surprised
How much goes in to your performance
It's not like we didn't
Think of someone else
It's not like you're not
Sympathetic
But you took a wrong turn
Somewhere on the path
And then it comes
To a very sticky end
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 23rd Jul 2017 12:42
I like this. Great title. I'm not sure why you need to 'stretch' it so much. I would enjoy it even more in the simple couplets that they are. Or - maybe- it's different voices! Ah, that would work.