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Sorrowfully

 

"As you are bewitched
By my beauty
Allow me to be a bit naughty!

Pleasure expect not to gain
Without a little pain.

Take me to
The most expensive
Restaurants that exist.
Let me order dishes top
On the menu list.
Hurry let us go
To another place
Having for an open -kitchen
A space.
Don't you doubt
I have interest
For a none-stop bout.

Buy me
Expensive cosmetics
And shoes
Dresses and an overcoat
And what not?
Not forgetting money
For transport.


Though when
You got me first, I was broke
I had a pride strong
Like a rock!"

Although you seem a dove,
A wolf in a sheep's skin,
You are blind to
A genuine love.


Hence,I have decided
The problem to solve!
Before you jilt me
When I have nothing
For you to siphon,
Finish with you
I ought
As love must not be
A typhoon.


So dove,
Helpless, may helps you
God who is above!

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SadLove lost

◄ Cure a wound another could

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Fri 4th Aug 2017 12:41

Thank you Colin Hill .Yes Poetry sometimes records experiences which others may share.True to this ,readers response criticism says the reader is the author.

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Fri 4th Aug 2017 08:50

I like this Alem - it reminds me of an incident that occurred to a friend. Thanks for posting. Hope all is well in your part of the world. Colin.

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Thu 3rd Aug 2017 06:32

You are right.The first part under a quotation mark is the girl's words.He was reminding himself what she used to say.
Thank you!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 2nd Aug 2017 17:16

I think I 'get it', I think I do. There is a change of 'voice', isn't there, from one to the other? I really like the line 'As love must not be a typhoon'.

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